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Must be quite a party!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 9, 2007 at 8:44 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on December 9, 2007 at 5:19 PM
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intriguing post with a nice twist>>>>>sam
posted by
sam444
on December 9, 2007 at 4:58 PM
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Sorry, just don't get the connection
Now I understand that to be in love might be a fool (whatever that is), but after reading 7 lines ( which could have been said in 2...ending with the master)to just to throw in a "drunken party" throws me off, and wouldn't make sense to me unless you showed me the hidden passage to your connection ( which might have been interesting). After all, poetry is not throwing some concepts on the wall to see if it sticks (though sometimes that is the inner process).
Consider this: that poetry is an insight, first into oneself, and then that there are some things worth communicating (probably because they have some universality). Hope this critique helps you, and keep on writing. It takes guts to pick up a pen and begin a life process. It's not that unusual and we all began someplce. If I can help you in any way, let me know.
posted by
jfm32
on December 9, 2007 at 2:14 PM
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