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Ole!
Very cinematic presentation.
Carl Peter
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cpklapper
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February 16, 2008
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Ambitious, jfm. Well done...
posted by
saul_relative
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December 9, 2007
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Deep and mysterious, beautiful images, the dance as a metaohor. Great! Harpo47
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Harpo47
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December 8, 2007
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absolutely beaitiful
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star4sky5
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December 6, 2007
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jfm
There almost too many wonderful lines to choose from but this verse stood out for me"
The sky had lost its mooring and
the clouds had floated out to sea
The silver thread had vanished
and the door to the Sun could not be seen
Your creativity and vibrant imagination shines through on this piece. Bravo! 
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Troosha
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December 6, 2007
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Great metaphors. The last two lines underscores the value of time.
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EX_TURPI
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December 6, 2007
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Truely a masterpiece
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slinkycruiser
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December 5, 2007
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that was amazing.
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FineYoungSinger
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December 5, 2007
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afzal50
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December 5, 2007
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