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this is incredible poetry.
I'd even say spectacular.
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FineYoungSinger
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star4sky5
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the life of art
I like reading you because you got this way of startling me with an off-center dimension that seems to be centered. In this one, I was wondering where I was going until the last stanza and line sprung the release back into the poem (and what a surprise). As I went back to re-read I could sense the 3 dimensions: Mother and Child (archetype)/ sculptor/ and you the viewer perceving that relationship thru your own construct, and re-entering it (therefore the 3rd dimension--and an almost impossible task thru words/concepts). So, I didn't get it till the end where "petrified" threw everything back into multiple meanings--as if you were painting the scuptor, who was sculpting in an outer form his/her internal vision as if to be held spellbound in Madonna and Child.
P.S. Thanks for your wonderful and thoughtful insights on "Have you ever met a lost love in a dream?"
John
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jfm32
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December 2, 2007
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Beautiful composition; beautiful juxtaposition.
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EX_TURPI
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December 2, 2007
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awesome
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spinner
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December 2, 2007
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awesome
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spinner
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December 2, 2007
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Beautiful composition
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Kayzzaman
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December 2, 2007
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Beautiful composition
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Kayzzaman
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December 2, 2007
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hmmmmmm
just beautiful..... thanks for sharing.... have a good day...... keep smiling..
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whiteknight3128
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December 2, 2007
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