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Hi Kay
I liked the poem 
Lou
posted by
Cameraeye
on November 23, 2007 at 5:29 PM
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Very deep Very good
You're more staid than i am. i'm more unconventional. Here's what i call a short poem.
Punk Poetry
ALL POETRY NEEDS TO BE FUCKED UP THE ASS!
Except poetry that makes sense and is compassionate.
EGOISTS need not apply.
posted by
Sudanym_
on November 23, 2007 at 4:34 PM
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soooooo how about a long poem? ahhahahahahah!
Just kidding. Great stuff, Kayz.....
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on November 23, 2007 at 12:47 PM
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WAY TO SPIN A YARN THAT IS THE MARVELOUS. I GOT LOST IN THE IMAGERY. SUPERB!!!!!! SAM
posted by
sam444
on November 23, 2007 at 11:08 AM
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A Yarn of Spin : A short Poem
Beautiful
posted by
Oosthuizen
on November 23, 2007 at 8:12 AM
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kayz
well said.
posted by
richinstore
on November 23, 2007 at 6:17 AM
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A Yarn of Spin: A Short Poem
A very profound poem and beautiful imagery!
posted by
2Philomena
on November 23, 2007 at 5:46 AM
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Very well done!
thanks for sharing
posted by
mariaki
on November 23, 2007 at 4:51 AM
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Profound !
posted by
afzal50
on November 23, 2007 at 4:50 AM
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