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posted by star4sky5 on November 19, 2007 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful poem!

posted by FineYoungSinger on November 19, 2007 at 7:24 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent exit! Love is only true when unconditional & only for the sake

of love!

'aching hearts
in contorted backs arched to the sky........excellent!

denizen.....pefectly placed as well. This piece is extrememly complicated, but that appears to be your point.

posted by Layna_Ann on November 18, 2007 at 5:37 PM | link to this | reply

Well, Chrisja, that's different.

I think that if I read it again, it may grow on me.   I think you have expressed some things that I may have hidden deeply in the past.

posted by TAPS. on November 18, 2007 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

chrisja

lovely poem.

posted by richinstore on November 18, 2007 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on November 18, 2007 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply

hmmmmm

very beautiful...... have a good day... keep smiling...

posted by whiteknight3128 on November 18, 2007 at 5:14 AM | link to this | reply

Nice!!!

posted by mama_joy on November 18, 2007 at 5:12 AM | link to this | reply