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Kayzzman
Delicious and enjoyable. Good post.
Lou
posted by
Cameraeye
on November 9, 2007 at 9:17 PM
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WOW...............
"And you will be walking on a path strewn with flowers"
beautiful line...........can'tforget even in sleep........
posted by
star4sky5
on November 9, 2007 at 5:48 PM
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WOW...............
"And you will be walking on a path strewn with flowers"
beautiful line...........can'tforget even in sleep........
posted by
star4sky5
on November 9, 2007 at 5:48 PM
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K, I love that line........walking on a path with flowers.......
posted by
star4sky5
on November 9, 2007 at 5:46 PM
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K, I love that line........walking on a path with flowers.......
posted by
star4sky5
on November 9, 2007 at 5:46 PM
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Kayzz: Powerful and inspiring.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on November 9, 2007 at 9:10 AM
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Kayzz
You just flicker your hope in whisperings
Like an extinguished candle in the air
I hate when someone does that. I prefer your more celebratory second verse. 
posted by
Troosha
on November 9, 2007 at 8:49 AM
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Kayzz
Wonderful K, thanks for sharing that insight. Take Care.
Bless
Regards
posted by
UncharteredSoul
on November 9, 2007 at 8:18 AM
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I would have to agree!!!!
Very beautiful poem..
posted by
tyleness
on November 9, 2007 at 8:02 AM
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hmmmmm
just beautiful..... thanks for sharing.... have a good day... keep smiling...
posted by
whiteknight3128
on November 9, 2007 at 7:07 AM
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