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Re: Thanks everyone - sorry the meaning was a bit veiled.
Or Hungary in 1956! :)

posted by Brian76 on November 3, 2007 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks everyone - sorry the meaning was a bit veiled.
But hopefully you can just see it as a picture of the fermenting of revolutionary feeling in some oppressed place, not necessarily where you live. i pictured it as Eastern Europe, say, Czechoslovakia or somewhere like that in the 60s around the time of Dubcek. Or earlier, say Russia around the time of Lenin. OK, the revolution didn;t turn out well, but that's beside the point!! The people had high hopes of freedom from oppression. And in the Czech example they were hoping for freedom from Communism. So it really doesn't matter what the system is, it's the oppression that counts and the people's hopes for release...

posted by Antonionioni on November 3, 2007 at 6:12 AM | link to this | reply

Thick-headed me, too. Failed to see what you are trying to tell us. Why can't poets speak clearly instead of in vieled speech!

posted by RobertMadang on November 2, 2007 at 11:44 PM | link to this | reply

OUTSTANDING IMAGERY!!  sam

posted by sam444 on November 2, 2007 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

idiot (me)
didn't get it.

posted by Sudanym_ on November 2, 2007 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

hmmmmmmm
hmmmmmmm im not sure.... im still thinking on this one... ill get back to you..... thanks much.... have a good day....

posted by whiteknight3128 on November 2, 2007 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

Antonio,
Do not look for me
in the wild weeds
or in the frothy glen
but at break of day
I'll wheel away
 and be gone.

posted by Zena77 on November 2, 2007 at 5:38 PM | link to this | reply

Tony, that's bloody inspiring, made my heart swell, don't ever start a
revolution Tony, cause I just might follow wherever you lead bard!

posted by CringeintheUSA on November 2, 2007 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks everyone! I'm f-acking tired right now so I'll not hang around
too long either!! Victory!

posted by Antonionioni on November 2, 2007 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

Antonio, sorry I missed you, but there's some birds flying
over in my blog. You've inspired me. I'm not feeling very articulate right now, so i'll just say I was here.

posted by Zena77 on November 2, 2007 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

Well, I think Blogit made a very bad decision.

I'm glad to see that everyone here has done so much to support our friend!  I have one thing to say---I hope that everyone here that plans on remaining a Blogit member remembers the atmosphere of fun that Dave created whenever he was present, and always try to do the same.

Ok, I have two things to say:  ACK.

posted by FineYoungSinger on November 2, 2007 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

antonio

posted by richinstore on November 2, 2007 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

Antonioioioioioio
Wonderful sonnet and now I understand your Churchill pic in my blog comment my friend..

posted by WileyJohn on November 2, 2007 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

appreciation---that's a great word today, isn't it?
I appreciate fine writing, fine people, and I stand up for those I appreciate.  I appreciate you, Antonionioni, for understanding and for acting upon what is right!

posted by FineYoungSinger on November 2, 2007 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

Onioniiiiiiiiii
excellent sonnet


posted by White_Elephant on November 2, 2007 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

Well expressed sonnet !

posted by afzal50 on November 2, 2007 at 6:42 AM | link to this | reply

Good sonnet.

posted by Kayzzaman on November 2, 2007 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent
Soon we could make a book from the literature insipred by Dave and his departure.

posted by Brian76 on November 2, 2007 at 5:15 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks FYS - I appreciate it! And so would he!

posted by Antonionioni on November 2, 2007 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

Antonionioni, thank you so much for this sonnet...it's a beautiful tribute to our friend!

posted by FineYoungSinger on November 2, 2007 at 4:51 AM | link to this | reply