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keep writing this is lovely poetry well done

posted by Kabu on October 29, 2007 at 2:04 AM | link to this | reply

very nice/.....

posted by star4sky5 on October 28, 2007 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

Good post with wonderful words.katzs

posted by katzs on October 28, 2007 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

Hello there

Fine post.

Lou

posted by Cameraeye on October 28, 2007 at 10:08 PM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman
Really good supplication! Hope you're heard!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on October 28, 2007 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

one of those "O" poem. nice piece. i really like it.

thank for your comment.

posted by draco101 on October 28, 2007 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

Kayzz

Gave me chills.  Bravo!

Julie

posted by Jokester on October 28, 2007 at 1:57 PM | link to this | reply

great work, Kayzzaman!

posted by FineYoungSinger on October 28, 2007 at 11:35 AM | link to this | reply

Bravo! This is chilling; asking for a taste of death in life;
"Give us a chance to feel the chill of death before life"  'tis the epitome of life.

posted by roadscross on October 28, 2007 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

to the poetry
Well .. you definitely got the real .. I mean I commented nicely on many others that I feel like what ever I say about your poems would be degrading to your work .. thankful for the works of art you provide .. keep it up .. by the way .. I’m new around here.  

posted by Angesom_AG on October 28, 2007 at 7:54 AM | link to this | reply

WEll said ! It's Profound !

posted by afzal50 on October 28, 2007 at 6:24 AM | link to this | reply

Good poem of prayer & praise.

posted by A-and-B on October 28, 2007 at 6:13 AM | link to this | reply

kayz

posted by richinstore on October 28, 2007 at 5:20 AM | link to this | reply