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Yes, Mneme, it is a little, but it was meant to be humorous really.

posted by Antonionioni on October 16, 2007 at 12:32 AM | link to this | reply

Tony, well put, if a bit self-deprecating. Family life is very important.

posted by mneme on October 15, 2007 at 7:06 PM | link to this | reply

PS: Dave, could you not see see my luvverly piccy?

posted by Antonionioni on October 15, 2007 at 11:38 AM | link to this | reply

Mucho, I mean - mucho doh-o...

posted by Antonionioni on October 15, 2007 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

Ta - much obligado!

posted by Antonionioni on October 15, 2007 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

To me, another brilliant one, Tony!!! S U P E R B .......................

posted by Bhaskar.ing on October 15, 2007 at 10:10 AM | link to this | reply

Seeing as how you are asking, no, I have never tried a canoe.

I've tried a kazoo.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 15, 2007 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

Tony, wot u on about? You're sounding like me now.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 15, 2007 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks guys - have you tried a canoe - or is it a kayak?

posted by Antonionioni on October 15, 2007 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

I didn't like the first line of your poem, then read the second
and by the end, discovered it was pretty good after all. Nice mood building... Keep writing!

posted by Pat_B on October 15, 2007 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

NICE NICE

Applauds.

Bless

Regards

 

posted by UncharteredSoul on October 15, 2007 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

teehee... I like that! And the photo :)

posted by opheliablue on October 15, 2007 at 6:43 AM | link to this | reply

Good work!  I agree true wealth is family and friends

posted by mama_joy on October 15, 2007 at 5:18 AM | link to this | reply

'Ain't life just grand!!

posted by mariaki on October 15, 2007 at 4:07 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Tony---what a wonderfull picture!!! And a wonderfull read too! Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 15, 2007 at 1:49 AM | link to this | reply

Famly, as they say in Peckham, is all. I am getting ready for the Hebden family by shopping for a caftan and stocking up on herbal cigarettes. I don't even smoke, but as you know, it's the currency out there.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 15, 2007 at 12:33 AM | link to this | reply

LOL!
.... it's not all about money Antonionioni ....

posted by White_Elephant on October 15, 2007 at 12:29 AM | link to this | reply

Hi guys!
This was meant to be humorous when I started it, but that's not obvious from the poem. There's a bit of me in there, but my own situation is a bit better than this. I have a happy family life - but at the moment I don't live with them full time!!

posted by Antonionioni on October 15, 2007 at 12:20 AM | link to this | reply

posted by star4sky5 on October 14, 2007 at 10:22 PM | link to this | reply

antonio

posted by richinstore on October 14, 2007 at 9:51 PM | link to this | reply

hey now
you know deep inside if you can stand the situation or not, only you.  There is a voice inside of everyone telling the truth, many ignore it and get into a mess, just sit quietly and listen to your own inner-voice, and you'll have a true answer.  Good luck.  Max Cohen

posted by maxcohen on October 14, 2007 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

Antonio
You're growed up! You know the answers!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on October 14, 2007 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

Good decision. Be happy with what you have.

posted by RobertMadang on October 14, 2007 at 5:38 PM | link to this | reply

Everyone deserve a chance of happiness.katzs

posted by katzs on October 14, 2007 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

Antonthefamilyman, no don't stay if there's no joy!

posted by Kabu on October 14, 2007 at 4:49 PM | link to this | reply

Antonio

posted by Enigmatic68 on October 14, 2007 at 4:42 PM | link to this | reply

As long as everyone's happy!

posted by Sheilah on October 14, 2007 at 4:34 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks and good night Moon!

posted by Antonionioni on October 14, 2007 at 4:10 PM | link to this | reply

Very wise decision. Moon

posted by magic_moon on October 14, 2007 at 3:53 PM | link to this | reply