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Dancing spirit
You truly made these words dance. Was deeply felt.
Regards
posted by
UncharteredSoul
on September 26, 2007 at 7:31 AM
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I have just changed the last word in the poem from win to spin. When I was writing it yesterday, I just couldn't come up with the right ending. Do you agree spin is better than win? Tell me what you think.
thanks
dancingspirit
posted by
dancingspirit
on September 23, 2007 at 7:10 PM
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Re: very good
thank you also
posted by
dancingspirit
on September 23, 2007 at 7:03 PM
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Re: Dancing.......
thanks heaps glad you loved it
posted by
dancingspirit
on September 23, 2007 at 7:03 PM
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Dancing.......
The lines in this poem really danced!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 23, 2007 at 6:36 PM
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very good
enjoyed reading your words as well - peg
posted by
1pegesus4u
on September 23, 2007 at 1:55 PM
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dancing....it's cool
posted by
star4sky5
on September 22, 2007 at 4:00 PM
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very nice!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on September 22, 2007 at 8:07 AM
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Dancing Spirit
I felt that I should write a poem about my name, so here it is. I just wrote it this morning so I am pleased that I have started my hols with some writing.
dancingspirit
sometimes known as spiritdancer
posted by
dancingspirit
on September 21, 2007 at 7:27 PM
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