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You've hit it right on the nose mneme
I'm leaving him behind.

posted by Discombobulated78 on September 21, 2007 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

discom
you'll know when you want to write about something else. sounds to me like this person can't step out of his comfort zone, whereas you have travelled and built a life outside the box. enjoy it.

posted by mneme on September 21, 2007 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

Yes indeed Dave
I could go on and on and on about it... but it's time to move on. There's really nothing that hasn't been said. It's just the same old story, it's happened to lots of women. I'll let it go eventually, it'll take some time. But I'm going to have to find something else to write about . But it's so easy to write about heartbreak isn't it?

posted by Discombobulated78 on September 17, 2007 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

Stuff never sent, stuff never said. It's a rich seam to mine...

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on September 17, 2007 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Tony :)

posted by Discombobulated78 on September 17, 2007 at 6:06 AM | link to this | reply

Well pelagus here's the deal
The first time I told this person goodbye back in 1997, I wrote him a VERY long e-mail (yes this is an internet relationship). It was very very long, exhaustive even. This time, I thought it best to keep it short. This time my e-mail (yet, another e-mail) said only what absolutely had to be said. I didn't want it to be goodbye in an e-mail again but he kept me at such a distance there was no other way.

posted by Discombobulated78 on September 17, 2007 at 6:05 AM | link to this | reply

Very clear - good to see you are facing the truth in a self-confident way.

posted by Antonionioni on September 17, 2007 at 12:34 AM | link to this | reply

good to have it all out
will you really never send it? It could be another good step to take.

Good healing.


posted by pelagus on September 16, 2007 at 10:38 PM | link to this | reply