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JMO
Nice. 

posted by jacentaOld on August 31, 2007 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

I really like this...
The first 3 lines gave me goosebumps!  It's quite chilling in a way.  I love the repetition of "It was you..." Nice one

posted by opheliablue on August 30, 2007 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

JMO
Now, which woman did that?

posted by Soul_Builder101 on August 29, 2007 at 11:27 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by star4sky5 on August 29, 2007 at 10:48 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely ! Well said !

posted by afzal50 on August 29, 2007 at 10:31 PM | link to this | reply

Such imagery!! Very well done, JMO...

posted by saul_relative on August 29, 2007 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply