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Thanks Tristan, your comment has inspired me to write another poem
A little number which I will post soon :).
posted by
Discombobulated78
on August 27, 2007 at 9:53 PM
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Your prose!
Don't apologise for prose, prose is poetry and you make it so, it feels free, like it allowed you space to breathe and just flow with the feelings that needed expression. There is so much grit in it, in all your work, it's biting, mournful, strong yet surrendered to!
posted by
twistedson
on August 27, 2007 at 6:16 PM
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discom
there's a sense of movement here, I feel.
posted by
mneme
on August 26, 2007 at 5:12 PM
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Vodka is good...I'll pass on the bitters! Great work, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 25, 2007 at 4:07 PM
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