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My dear friends, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for
your uplifting and caring words. Unfortunately this poem is for real and although I am generally a very positive person, even my own words couldn't comfort me. But yours have, and I am truly grateful - especially to Sue - thank you sweetie for your concern.
posted by
mariaki
on August 10, 2007 at 2:11 AM
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This is a lovely poem which speaks to my heart we all have days like this.
I hope you feel better soon.
posted by
proc
on August 9, 2007 at 4:21 PM
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 9, 2007 at 3:13 PM
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U can do anything U put head & shoulders to...shalomandsupportforyourchoice
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 9, 2007 at 2:27 PM
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Maria, u can't unchain..........because some one is holding you on their
heart
posted by
star4sky5
on August 9, 2007 at 1:11 PM
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mariaki--yes you have been haveing a Dark Day-however-you have written
about it-beautifully! I do hope you are ok? Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 9, 2007 at 12:59 PM
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OH MY FRIEND YOU HAD WRITTEN VERY BEAUTIFUL AND SAD TOO ......
........But LOVE IS FRESH STREAMS AND THE BREATHE OF LIFE BUT THE CHAINED AROUND THE HEART IS THE MELTING FEELING THAT WE CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT WHO TRUE LOVE
YOU DESERVE ALL THE LOVE MY FRIEND.............the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on August 9, 2007 at 12:47 PM
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Mariaki
The poem itself might be sad but clearly the words flowed from your heart and soul.
posted by
Troosha
on August 9, 2007 at 10:31 AM
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posted by
Amanda__
on August 9, 2007 at 8:24 AM
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A remarkable poem Mariaki - it's so true. Hope things improve.
posted by
Antonionioni
on August 9, 2007 at 7:23 AM
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I am so grateful to people such as yourself who open their hearts and show us how similarly we all hurt through your poem.. Blessings and Peace to you~OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on August 9, 2007 at 7:03 AM
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Maria....Lovely poem....not all beautiful words.
come from a place of smiles. Sometimes the ones that touch us deep are the ones of truth as yours are here.....smile brighter days coming.
posted by
Irish3
on August 9, 2007 at 6:57 AM
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expressed very well...I hope you are ok?....
Take care.
posted by
_Symphony_
on August 9, 2007 at 5:50 AM
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Gppd morning.
Good morning! I see you are having a blue day but you have written a poignant poem. I hope things get better for you as the day progresses. AmMused
posted by
AmMused
on August 9, 2007 at 5:31 AM
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mariaki....................
Whatever it is that's causing your pain will soon be over, I hope.
Your poem speaks loudly of your feelings. God bless.
posted by
MaggieMae
on August 9, 2007 at 5:23 AM
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maria, that is so beautiful and exactly
how I feel at the moment...you just remember that it is only a moment and do never let such an item eat at you forever. Hopes for you, Dear Friend. -Ted
to better days...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 9, 2007 at 5:18 AM
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