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I like the tone
The way of writing and the style is very straight-forward, like you're talking instead of mincing words in poetry; I like that.
posted by
NightMajik
on August 8, 2007 at 2:47 AM
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shams - A very good example of, 'coming on too strong' and you wrote
this very well.
posted by
FoliageGold
on August 6, 2007 at 6:55 PM
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That's wonderful Shams! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 6, 2007 at 1:43 PM
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absolutely beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on August 6, 2007 at 8:59 AM
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Shams
The closing verse is wonderful! Great poem!
posted by
Troosha
on August 6, 2007 at 8:54 AM
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posted by
Amanda__
on August 6, 2007 at 8:53 AM
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~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on August 6, 2007 at 5:24 AM
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