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Hey

I just wanted to thank you for reading my poetry, I'm new here, Just getting started. and to tell you that you are an awesome writer. Take care.

posted by 23013 on August 24, 2007 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

i agree with all, excellent , creative and fun

posted by callista on August 23, 2007 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

Nice.

posted by spanish_dragon on August 6, 2007 at 2:17 PM | link to this | reply

Different and creative poetry - I enjoyed it. Hope you will be posting more

posted by PoetRaye on July 29, 2007 at 3:02 PM | link to this | reply

and play... word games (what else!)

Do u have time to play the SPELLRIDER vocab building game on my leading post for DURBIN? I saw your "admiration" and tarried a bit more (Blogit will be the ruin of me, Mark me words, Lassie!)  god night---namaskaram Ji

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 27, 2007 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

come back soon

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 26, 2007 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

sup

that was very interesting.  I was intrigued by the word-play.  thanx 4 the comments.  It is actually about my brother passing away.  he killed himself in december and I still can't quite comprehend because you never even knew he thought of it.  there was no note, so i don't know why and i feel so guilty.  so i try to write about it in an attempt to relieve myself of these awful feelings.  sometimes it works.  sometimes i just feel worse seeing it written out before me.  i know this was long.  i'm kind of talkative tonight and have no one to talk to. thanx 4 reading.  :-D

posted by serenity420 on July 25, 2007 at 8:45 PM | link to this | reply

How very unusual. The rhythm of the piece grabs you and the word-play shakes you up.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on July 23, 2007 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent

well done

posted by mariaki on July 23, 2007 at 3:33 AM | link to this | reply

It reads like an anthem. Rock on, Straightforward...

posted by saul_relative on July 22, 2007 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

very nice

posted by star4sky5 on July 21, 2007 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

very nice

posted by star4sky5 on July 21, 2007 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful. Original. Pondersome!

Durbinforpeace

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 21, 2007 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

I love it...

posted by nemonemo on July 20, 2007 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

posted by spanish_dragon on July 20, 2007 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply