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this seems to relate to most lives today, i sometimes wonder here we put it

all, another poem i really enjoyed,

posted by callista on August 23, 2007 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

I find that it helps to write when the mind gets cluttered

which it seems you have done.  It is the corresponding and opposing action of Sir Walter Scot's strategy of reading to remove writer's block.  As to blanking, I am afraid that in my case it is just a sign of approaching senility or the ravages of repeated, random brainstorms.

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on June 18, 2007 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

Straightforward

Better to have too much going on up there, than to suffer from what I like to call, "Paris Hilton Syndrome!"

posted by Enigmatic68 on June 7, 2007 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Blank blank blank out

I wonder if that blanking out has anything to do with all the clutter that we have in our houses, or is it that some of us simply marry packrats?

Great work here!                                                                    Damon

posted by Damond on June 7, 2007 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

Straightforward

I guess it happens to everyone.  I don't know anyone with instant recall of everything they want to remember.

posted by TAPS. on June 5, 2007 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Straightforward

Sounds like me sometimes...lol.

posted by avant-garde on June 5, 2007 at 3:59 AM | link to this | reply

As a student of law, I suggest you fill in the blanks...

posted by scriber on June 4, 2007 at 2:35 PM | link to this | reply

straightforward

Yes, it's amazing how cluttered blanking out is.  Well done.  Hadn't thought about it in these terms. 

posted by FoliageGold on June 4, 2007 at 2:09 PM | link to this | reply

I loved reading this!!

posted by trisha4005 on June 4, 2007 at 12:54 PM | link to this | reply

YOUR POEM SAID TO ME YOU ARE THE PERFECT HUMAN VERY HONEST AND OPEN HEART,,,,,,,,,,,,,the stranger

posted by NAJWA on June 4, 2007 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

Your poetry

I like your poetry.. it speaks from the heart.. and is from the same heart we all share

posted by OTA. on June 4, 2007 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

So true - I'm sure you're not alone!!

posted by Antonionioni on June 4, 2007 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

Well written Straightforward! I believe we all (or most of us)-carry a

great deal of 'clutter'-or-'baggage'-and that is why-'other's lives touch parts of our own.Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 4, 2007 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

Nice!

posted by IronicParadox on June 4, 2007 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

Hmm...i think i have selective discarding

posted by dark_mistress on June 4, 2007 at 3:57 AM | link to this | reply

posted by star4sky5 on June 3, 2007 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

wEll Said !!!!!

posted by afzal50 on June 3, 2007 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply