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Thanks Fol and Ted :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on June 8, 2007 at 2:26 AM
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discombob.....
Oh my, yes. Well done. We can always keep our memories and smile.
posted by
FoliageGold
on June 7, 2007 at 12:59 PM
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78
I do hope you leave it behind. Such featherweights can become as lead.
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 5, 2007 at 12:08 PM
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Bhas it's not as bad as that... but I was disappointed yes.
But I'll get over it. The real gift will come later, I'm told.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on June 3, 2007 at 3:33 PM
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Discom -
Teasing. There is an underlying message soft and reminiscent of one who is now no longer the sweet he that he used to be? Have I understood correctly? Here are some
s for you if I have.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 3, 2007 at 9:09 AM
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This is a really good 'view' of 'teasing'! Leaving one in confusion.
posted by
Scramble
on June 2, 2007 at 8:56 AM
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I like the poem - it's very emotional but in an understated way.
posted by
Antonionioni
on June 2, 2007 at 6:34 AM
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lovely poem.
posted by
afzal50
on June 2, 2007 at 5:43 AM
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Dis
damn soup.. never fills me up either
posted by
Blue_feathers
on June 2, 2007 at 4:47 AM
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Discom
this is very enigmatic... interesting.
posted by
mneme
on June 2, 2007 at 3:40 AM
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