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Thanks all, and yes Bhas I'm in a chirpier mood.
Not ignoring my writing impulses these last couple of days. :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on June 1, 2007 at 2:31 PM
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It's a nice piece of writing, Discom - I enjoyed it.
posted by
Antonionioni
on June 1, 2007 at 10:41 AM
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Hi there Discom -
the veil of separatedness. So sweeetly said that it is igniting
. Hope you're well and in a chirpy mood now?
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 1, 2007 at 7:49 AM
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Dis
that veil that separates.. that very thin veil .. is sometimes all that keeps us from leaping into the abyss..
I think it is poetry. But I dont know anything.
posted by
Blue_feathers
on June 1, 2007 at 6:56 AM
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The atmosphere of your words alone, is poetic. Well-done, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 1, 2007 at 1:37 AM
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Well it can even be called poetry because of the tremendous flow and
harmony .
posted by
afzal50
on June 1, 2007 at 1:27 AM
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There isn't much of a line between poetry and prose I think
Poetry's such a fluid thing, it can take almost any form. And I like that.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on June 1, 2007 at 1:15 AM
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I was just wondering about this the other day ...
what does really separate a "poem" from simply a series of flowery sentences?
Sometimes, when I drive across the desert
in the middle of the night, with no other cars around,
I start imagining: What if there was no civilization out there?
No cities, no factories, no people?
And then I think: No people or factories?
Then who made this car? And this highway?
posted by
Mademoiselle
on May 31, 2007 at 10:47 PM
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WELL ITS VERY PASSIONATE AND POETIC
posted by
Kabu
on May 31, 2007 at 10:30 PM
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