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to jump or not to jump.. to bleed or not bleed.. to love

loved this one!

posted by Blue_feathers on May 31, 2007 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks all :)

posted by Discombobulated78 on May 29, 2007 at 10:38 PM | link to this | reply

78, a very cool write.

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on May 27, 2007 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

mneme, really neither one of us has...yet.
I'll be jumping first though.

posted by Discombobulated78 on May 25, 2007 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent poem, Discom - very knowing.

posted by Antonionioni on May 25, 2007 at 12:17 PM | link to this | reply

discom
You say so much in a few lines... did he?

posted by mneme on May 25, 2007 at 3:26 AM | link to this | reply

Good poem. Well written .

posted by afzal50 on May 25, 2007 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply