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Compromise Tony..
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 3, 2007 at 7:54 AM
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Hi Neil - thanks! Just think - the ark must have contained
woodworm, and woodpeckers and the like. How did it stay afloat? But then it was only a month or so wasn't it?
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 2, 2007 at 10:29 AM
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Hi Bhaskar - well, like me, pretty much! Or is it like you, d'you think?
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 2, 2007 at 10:26 AM
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Is it time for another big bang? BANG....now let's start over!
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on May 2, 2007 at 10:17 AM
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Re: Yes, Chris - one lump or two?
TWO please Tony!
posted by
Scramble
on May 2, 2007 at 8:10 AM
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Hi Tony.Immensely enjoyable.'The kettle' has put your readers on fire.
Liked this writer from another planet. Like me or like you?
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 2, 2007 at 5:48 AM
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Hi FreeManWalking - my favourite time would be the early 70s.
because it's the first period i can really remember. Anything that needs a lot of research is a turn-off for me to write, though.
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 2, 2007 at 12:34 AM
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Thanks very much, Proc - a slice of toast with it?
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 2, 2007 at 12:31 AM
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Tony - this poem reminds me that I often wish to create a world or at
least a sense of time and place in my writing. My place would be that world of the 1960's, maybe late '50's. The clothes, the music, the vibe. We are all little universes of potential
posted by
FreeManWalking
on May 1, 2007 at 5:36 PM
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I just like the way you take something like frustration and weave it into
a believable tale containing magic ,then you bring us back to earth with a bump. Putting the kettle on,indeed. your poem made me smile.
posted by
proc
on May 1, 2007 at 4:38 PM
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Did you put the kettle on, Najwa? This is so civilised!
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 1, 2007 at 3:42 PM
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Yes, Chris - one lump or two?
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 1, 2007 at 3:41 PM
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True, Scriber. Tea is life's number one priority, or should be!
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 1, 2007 at 3:41 PM
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I DID TOO VERY intellgent writting still to come TONY 
and I agree with CHRIST>>>
>>>>>>the stranger........
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posted by
NAJWA
on May 1, 2007 at 3:06 PM
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Very good Tony! Put the kettle on-I'll be there as soon as it boils! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 1, 2007 at 12:29 PM
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Nicely done--Nothing interrupts tea time...
posted by
scriber
on May 1, 2007 at 11:18 AM
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