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Thanks Nightmajik, I think I know what you mean
It's as if you're continuing an existing thread by using "and" at the beginning of anything. It instantly creates a sense of movement.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on May 5, 2007 at 5:49 PM
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Beautiful
I love the first few lines, I love starting sentences or poems with 'and', it adds a certain atmosphere. Great work here.
posted by
NightMajik
on May 4, 2007 at 6:16 AM
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Beautiful, 78...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 2, 2007 at 12:04 PM
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Thanks all for your comments, and it's no problem RaeS. :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on May 2, 2007 at 11:58 AM
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Oops, sorry for maiming the spelling of your name, Discombobulated!
...:)
posted by
Katray2
on May 2, 2007 at 9:02 AM
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Wild 'n warm wish, Discombulated...Excellent flow and soul
posted by
Katray2
on May 2, 2007 at 8:55 AM
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The walls between us coming crashing down. Excellent imagery.Let-go, Discom
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 2, 2007 at 5:43 AM
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That's discombolulated. Thanks.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on May 1, 2007 at 4:40 PM
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Yes, but there is a small chance it will come true :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on May 1, 2007 at 9:46 AM
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Dis
I have to agree with Tony , Yet it was very beautiful
posted by
Kat02
on May 1, 2007 at 8:32 AM
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Hi Discom - this is bitter-sweet, since it's only a wish. Enjoyed it!
posted by
Antonionioni
on May 1, 2007 at 7:38 AM
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