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glad to know it....

posted by Star5_ on April 30, 2007 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

glad to know it....

posted by Star5_ on April 30, 2007 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

Sue - she called me not 3 minutes ago...I knew it

posted by FreeManWalking on April 30, 2007 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply

hmmm
so sad

posted by Star5_ on April 30, 2007 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

the image feels real

posted by pelagus on April 29, 2007 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply

My comment is an old poem I once wrote

Death in Life 2/11/99

I read your letters again
twice or a million
doesn’t matter.
It took me to the time

Before you died.
Your hands reached for me
open like a daisy to me.

The roses that died that year,
were like you,
only branches and thorns
could I feel.

Your letters are the relic
to prove that you once loved me.

The man I know now
lives resurrected
from the death of the lover
you used to be.

posted by Discombobulated78 on April 29, 2007 at 1:19 AM | link to this | reply

Short and expressive!

posted by Munih on April 28, 2007 at 6:51 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Amanda__ on April 28, 2007 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

the drum of the walk of the weary bleeding heart..

posted by Blue_feathers on April 28, 2007 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

It is a great march from time immemorial.

posted by afzal50 on April 28, 2007 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

But...
I like your writing... let me read on.

posted by Transcendental_Child on April 28, 2007 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply