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so beautiful pelaqus  

the pen shApes these wOrds

as the mind would like to fall asleep
to esCape
running away from Others

posted by drohan254 on April 18, 2007 at 11:11 PM | link to this | reply

thank you
yes, i think coping with feelings is better then swallowing & become miserable. Then... a pen & a piece of paper are also useful...

posted by pelagus on April 18, 2007 at 10:52 AM | link to this | reply

The sadness of heartbreak ( I recognize it) can be all- consuming...
from one who has had experience with this terrible malaise, I would recommend getting angry! It is better than swallowing tears, and being miserable...and it helps the healing process work more quickly. As my West Texas alter-ego Barbara Ann, a.k.a. Barbed, would say, "Clarissa Jo...he just ain't worth all this misery! Why I wouldn't piss on him if he was on fire!"

posted by muser on April 18, 2007 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Nice poem. WEll expressed .

posted by afzal50 on April 18, 2007 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply