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Justi...............
That's a great poem. Keep up the good work!
posted by
MaggieMae
on April 1, 2007 at 12:06 PM
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Sunnybeach
Thank you. I know nothing about rhyme, or meter any of that appropriate 'stuff' poems are made of I guess. I only know about passion for the hurting.
posted by
Justi
on March 27, 2007 at 9:13 AM
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Troosha
For you to comment me on a poem is such a compliment. Thank you so much. It sorta wrote itself. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on March 27, 2007 at 9:12 AM
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Whinge
Sorry I haven't checked in on you lately. Thank you so much for reading this. Be blessed dear one. Any donation anywhere to the work of taking care of the world's rejected is a blessing; given one time or weekly. God bless you dear one.
posted by
Justi
on March 27, 2007 at 9:11 AM
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Chilitree
U 2
I love the picture you painted with flowers and compassionate smile
posted by
Justi
on March 27, 2007 at 9:07 AM
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NightMajik
Thank you so much for your comment. They are compelling. God gave us the right to do His work when it is physical, we who call ourselves Christians must go where we are called.
posted by
Justi
on March 27, 2007 at 9:06 AM
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proc
Thank you so much. I appreciate your comment.
posted by
Justi
on March 27, 2007 at 9:04 AM
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Justi
Wow! Who said you're not a poet?
How hard it is for some to let love touch them.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on March 27, 2007 at 7:38 AM
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What an absolutely fabulous poem
about a broken soul, a misdirected young woman, and the visible signs of pain and pride.
posted by
Troosha
on March 27, 2007 at 7:09 AM
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It doesn't take a long journey to get you lost, does it? If girls
like these can be reached earlier then at least they've a whole lifetime of better possibilities ahead.
I worry that it's not so easy for those who've been in that life for a long time. How do they make changes? How do they see outside their own lives?
(I made a small donation to that charity I mentioned in another of your posts, I don't know if it's something I can maintain, but I will see).
posted by
CringeintheUSA
on March 27, 2007 at 4:08 AM
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posted by
Chilitree
on March 26, 2007 at 11:48 PM
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Beautiful poem
You paint a stark and compelling picture, thank you for sharing.
posted by
NightMajik
on March 26, 2007 at 11:41 PM
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Im so glad you turn your compassion into real actions.
God bless you and these needy ones He sends to you.
posted by
proc
on March 26, 2007 at 9:56 PM
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Then I'll come and read it
posted by
Kabu
on March 26, 2007 at 9:45 PM
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Kabu
Somewhere good I hope.
posted by
Justi
on March 26, 2007 at 9:42 PM
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Afzal
Thank you
posted by
Justi
on March 26, 2007 at 9:41 PM
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I'm looking forward to where this is heading.
posted by
Kabu
on March 26, 2007 at 9:04 PM
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Thought inducing poem.
posted by
afzal50
on March 26, 2007 at 8:05 PM
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