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Re: Feeling your magic flowing all around this place as you leave the room it
A somewhar belated thanks, Mystereo, for your comment.
posted by
cpklapper
on July 31, 2010 at 3:45 PM
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Feeling your magic flowing all around this place as you leave the room it
turns to only space. Deep and awsome read got somewhat lose yet i read to understand. Great concept. Can I share a post TIME WILL TELL page 3 poem 1 i'll continue to read. Thank You.
posted by
Mystereo
on March 14, 2009 at 4:36 PM
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Found, but not attained
As for Sancho, there are some that play a portion of that role in my little drama, the "realists" who see me as needing some "loving" and suggest alternatives to my more "romantic" devotion. One such even identified his ethnicity as "Spanish" when we first met, though he is very mixed, and with me, impoverished but having some Spanish kings in my ancestry (Delano line again), and my Dulcinea, of course, being a Hispanic lady of rare and sweetest beauty, we have the main characters covered.
Thank you for your pity and appreciation.
posted by
cpklapper
on April 13, 2007 at 8:31 PM
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Thank you for your flower, jacenta.
posted by
cpklapper
on April 13, 2007 at 8:04 PM
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Awww poor Don Quixote
I hope you find something more real than a windmill.
Just out of curiosity, who is your Sancho Panza? 
posted by
Discombobulated78
on April 6, 2007 at 1:30 PM
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Thank you, Neil, for your comment and lovely picture
But talk of Pelicans and Osprey makes me think of Albatrosses and Coleridge:
Ah ! well a-day ! what evil looks
Had I from old and young !
Instead of the cross, the Albatross
About my neck was hung. particularly as the first poem I wrote to her, which was intended only for her, deliberately adopted its meter to make reference to the Coleridge work those lines are from.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on April 1, 2007 at 8:37 PM
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Thank you, Star, for your concern
I also hope I am doing well, but I hope even more that our Star of India is doing very well in all her travels into the horizons.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on April 1, 2007 at 8:28 PM
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Thank you, Hana, for your comment
all writers hope to open a world to the reader's imagination.
posted by
cpklapper
on April 1, 2007 at 1:47 PM
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It's simple, Foliage!
I am epileptic and come out with random, rhyming phrases in my TS fits, which I supplement with the rhymes my drained and simplified mind thinks in afterwards. I especially have a fixation, or theme, when I write a poem, for which I finally think of some pithy expression by the time I reach the end. In a sense, I am writing the poem backwards, so my readers, who generally do not read backwards, find that they must read the beginning again and thus, by cycling, can follow the end-to-the-beginning causality and flow.
So, you see, it is all sickness and madness. Or just send Sam.
Rect Pearl
posted by
cpklapper
on April 1, 2007 at 10:28 AM
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Thank you, Tony, for picking up on the Quixotic reference
I was stacking empty cases extra high on a balcony in the warehouse when SHE walked through, after I had been singing snatches of "The Impossible Dream".
posted by
cpklapper
on March 31, 2007 at 8:56 PM
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cpklapper
posted by
jacentaOld
on March 31, 2007 at 8:53 PM
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Thank you, Troosha!
My heart has been full to breaking.
posted by
cpklapper
on March 31, 2007 at 8:43 PM
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The room still has her fragrance, your dreams, positive lessons...I think
even when we walk alone, Carl, let us not forget the beauty: there may be Pelicans & Osprey weaning yet another generation for independence.......shalomfromneil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 29, 2007 at 4:55 AM
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PEACE AND JOY FOR THE NEXT CLAPPER....
HOPE U ARE DOING WELL.....
posted by
star4sky5
on March 28, 2007 at 8:32 AM
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lovely words ..but my fair lady had left the room short story left for
the audience to imagine the beginning and what between
posted by
drohan254
on March 27, 2007 at 6:45 AM
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cpklapper
Lovely! How on earth do you get your lines to rhyme? I cannot do that! I also enjoy the way you're skilled at writing that last line which took me back to the beginning to read again. Well done!
posted by
FoliageGold
on March 26, 2007 at 7:41 AM
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This is very clever and works really well - ole!
posted by
Antonionioni
on March 25, 2007 at 2:48 PM
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and a little
. Nicely done!
posted by
Troosha
on March 25, 2007 at 2:25 PM
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