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posted by
star4sky5
on March 23, 2007 at 9:52 AM
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DELIGHTFUL!!
posted by
1TimeSoldier
on March 23, 2007 at 7:34 AM
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Yes, it sounds very much like a song. Good though!
posted by
Antonionioni
on March 23, 2007 at 4:52 AM
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good.nice words.I think it can be arranged into rhyming lines too.
rithwik.lancs
posted by
rihwik.lancs
on March 23, 2007 at 12:22 AM
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