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good one

posted by star4sky5 on February 15, 2007 at 10:39 PM | link to this | reply

This is so fresh and lovely...like a spring day!

posted by Passionflower on February 7, 2007 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

coooooooool.

posted by star4sky5 on February 7, 2007 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

I like it! Stop. Go forward. The choice is yours. We all await your decision. MoonSpirit

posted by syzygy on February 6, 2007 at 2:12 PM | link to this | reply

It's so nice .

posted by afzal50 on February 6, 2007 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Blue_feathers on February 6, 2007 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice beginning, Shams-i-Heartsong
I think it stands as a finished piece too quite flowingly.

posted by Katray2 on February 6, 2007 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply