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Thanks for the feedback!
I especially appreciate pithy, actually, because what I try to do is compress as much as I can into my poems. I rarely write long poems; I try to pack as much into a little space as I can. Keep chipping away, keeping working on it....
posted by
Discombobulated78
on January 28, 2007 at 8:46 PM
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Seductive and Sensual
is how I would describe it. And pithy, too.
posted by
cpklapper
on January 28, 2007 at 7:25 PM
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Satisfied surrender, eh?
That's interesting. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by that but it sounds intriguing.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on January 28, 2007 at 5:28 PM
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Hi - this has a nice feeling of satisfied surrender.
posted by
Antonionioni
on January 28, 2007 at 1:45 PM
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