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thanks dear friend, now we can read

posted by star4sky5 on January 26, 2007 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

It is different kind of a poem.

posted by afzal50 on January 26, 2007 at 12:09 AM | link to this | reply

are you trying to kep it a secret.....

posted by star4sky5 on January 25, 2007 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply

you have to change the color, Ican't read it

posted by star4sky5 on January 25, 2007 at 10:15 AM | link to this | reply

I like this, the way it's written with the repeating line
Also, it's honest - well done Ichi.

posted by Antonionioni on January 25, 2007 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply