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deela,
yeah..the comment is great, but the one whom I think doesn't have a face....
posted by
star4sky5
on January 23, 2007 at 2:12 PM
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U will know it's not a shadow because u will just know Star..
About distances in love..that's exactly what i meant Star..distances in loves are closer than we may think..even non-existent.
Thanks for sharing.
posted by
deelakreme
on January 23, 2007 at 1:27 PM
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he has the password.....only we know it. hahaha shadow.....you believe me??
U ARE IN BIG TIME TROUBLE BROTHER.......
posted by
star4sky5
on January 23, 2007 at 8:24 AM
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Sue - how are you gonna know, if he's but a shadow....
and not some echo of someone in your past?
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 22, 2007 at 11:21 PM
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Beautiful star
Dancing without games.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on January 22, 2007 at 9:38 PM
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thanks.....
posted by
star4sky5
on January 22, 2007 at 7:55 PM
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Some good things to think about...
posted by
Passionflower
on January 22, 2007 at 7:39 PM
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Star
This is for the one you truly care for good going loved it
posted by
Kat02
on January 22, 2007 at 7:08 PM
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posted by
quarterlifecrisis
on January 22, 2007 at 4:26 PM
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star4you...so well-said!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 22, 2007 at 3:52 PM
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Hi Star - good to see you back again!
posted by
Antonionioni
on January 22, 2007 at 3:20 PM
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Star,
Very deep and well-written.
posted by
mirash88
on January 22, 2007 at 2:14 PM
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thanks afzal
posted by
star4sky5
on January 22, 2007 at 10:18 AM
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Lovely poem.
posted by
afzal50
on January 22, 2007 at 10:00 AM
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star4you
This is lovely, it's really brimming with life, I love how it's honest, asking and telling. Thanks for sharing.
Also wanted to say thanks for commenting on my poetry so much, it's truly wonderful to read your comments.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 22, 2007 at 6:37 AM
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Hey Star
posted by
Joe_Love
on January 22, 2007 at 6:01 AM
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Honest, lovely ... beautiful.
posted by
Chilitree
on January 22, 2007 at 6:00 AM
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this is for the one who really loves me...
posted by
star4sky5
on January 22, 2007 at 5:58 AM
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