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wow, wow, wow........nice one

posted by star4sky5 on January 11, 2007 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

good contrasts - not sure what you REALLY felt like..tks for poem

posted by shadow-pen on January 10, 2007 at 5:23 AM | link to this | reply

Very sophisticated, I love it.
 I really like writing that explores dark & light - such a fundamental part of our lives, exterior and interior.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on January 10, 2007 at 4:44 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely poem.

posted by afzal50 on January 10, 2007 at 4:22 AM | link to this | reply