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Troosha
I really appreciate hearing your thoughts.  Thanks so much.  It does get very hard at times.  

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on December 18, 2006 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Sunny
Waiting and distance can take its toll.  There is clear evidence of this in this poem - a poem which is slightly more powerful than your usual pieces.  Albeit I read sadness and frustration, I thought it was very well  done. 

posted by Troosha on December 18, 2006 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Moon, I know, it's just the waiting that's so hard.
 

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on December 17, 2006 at 8:45 PM | link to this | reply

A beautiful poem, SunnyOne - try to hold on - your dream will become reality. MoonSpirit

posted by syzygy on December 17, 2006 at 7:16 PM | link to this | reply

MandaLee
Thanks so much!   

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on December 17, 2006 at 6:32 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny, This poem is so sweet!

posted by Amanda__ on December 17, 2006 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
You are right. There is only pain because of the love. Thanks Sweetie. I miss you too.   

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on December 16, 2006 at 5:35 PM | link to this | reply

Yet , it is this pain and mundane reality which every one craves for.
Love brings a joyful pain in life . I miss you .

posted by afzal50 on December 16, 2006 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

Bel
Thanks. It is very sad.  

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on December 16, 2006 at 5:00 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny
This is very sad. 

posted by bel_1965 on December 16, 2006 at 4:58 PM | link to this | reply