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You my friend.
should be proud of your old dad for such a magnificent piece of work.
posted by
tawakwan
on October 19, 2006 at 12:04 PM
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Mavro,
what a nice idea. I enjoyed reading this.
posted by
mneme
on October 19, 2006 at 5:20 AM
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Thanks all. You've made an old man very happy.
posted by
Mavro
on October 19, 2006 at 2:51 AM
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Mavro
Tell your Dad it's great!
posted by
Antipodean
on October 19, 2006 at 12:40 AM
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mavro, very strong
posted by
star4sky5
on October 18, 2006 at 9:02 PM
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Neil, as it gathered pace and I realised what it was saying,
I was quite strongly affected by it. I would suggest for best effect it could be edited or changed here or there, but it certainly has some power and some well-placed anger.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 18, 2006 at 2:44 PM
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