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I enjoyed this but you DO use
More than a few Love-worn cliches in it. I think when people try to write rhyming verse, they often resort to this.
Still a good read.
posted by
Passionflower
on August 19, 2006 at 9:52 PM
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Vroom-2, it never occurred to me before, but kryptonite was the perfect met
aphor for passionate love. Well done!
posted by
kingmi
on August 19, 2006 at 9:45 PM
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