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i like this
:)
posted by
DancesWithWords
on November 6, 2006 at 9:03 PM
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on October 23, 2006 at 8:32 PM
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....very cute, you made me chuckle (not such an easy feat!) Moon_Spirit 
posted by
syzygy
on July 31, 2006 at 9:54 PM
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hey, it's so nice.
posted by
star4sky5
on July 12, 2006 at 1:14 PM
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really so much to do so little time! A nice child-friendly style of poetry!
posted by
Straightforward
on July 12, 2006 at 10:02 AM
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this is great! i love it. :)
posted by
DancesWithWords
on June 7, 2006 at 9:51 PM
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Original_Influence
Nice poem.
posted by
jacentaOld
on June 2, 2006 at 4:06 AM
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you are always the same, excellent writing
posted by
star4sky5
on May 25, 2006 at 5:21 PM
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OI,
Very good! I remember those days very well.
posted by
SilverMoon7
on May 18, 2006 at 1:52 PM
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hii
lovely poetry...
posted by
abhilasha
on March 13, 2006 at 7:17 AM
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Nicely written
Great poem. Took me back to my elementary school days as well.
posted by
rafika
on March 2, 2006 at 4:14 AM
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And when we nine, time seemed so much bigger too, because it was a bigger percentage of the overall time we'd spent on earth.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on February 28, 2006 at 2:25 AM
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Do I remember those days...
loving the girl with the glass eye
looking over the shoulder of the genius
and I still flunked the test!
such a memory jogger, Dear Lady!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 26, 2006 at 8:49 AM
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avant-garde...thank you.
posted by
Original_Influence
on February 24, 2006 at 5:35 PM
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Original Influence
Your poem took me back a long way. Life certainly does fly by. Thanks for the nostalgia.
posted by
avant-garde
on February 24, 2006 at 3:23 PM
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Thank you both!
posted by
Original_Influence
on February 24, 2006 at 7:09 AM
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Great Poem
It is great that you can share your inner thoughts with other's on this site. I find it helps with our inner feelings and releaves tension and rage, bitterness and emptiness. I loved the poem by the way. Keep up the good work. 
posted by
qutiepie58
on February 24, 2006 at 6:50 AM
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Love it...
Thanks for sharing, Original!
posted by
ms_bradrock
on February 24, 2006 at 6:47 AM
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