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That's the danger of rhyming under the full moon. I'll check it out. Thanks.
posted by
food4thought
on August 17, 2005 at 10:37 PM
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I love this...it's simply wonderful...
I think it's odd that you chose to use the word "ground" twice in that first stanza. Perhaps some rewording so you can use a word that rhymes like "sound" or "mound".
posted by
Passionflower
on August 17, 2005 at 10:18 PM
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