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Here's the deal...
This is pretty much a narrative of a picnic I went to Saturday. Everything is basically true, except I did really know it was July, but some day....maybe I won't.....and maybe I won't realize September comes after August, till then, party on!
posted by
food4thought
on July 25, 2005 at 10:24 PM
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Hola
Love it! I remember the "old folks" talking about how things used to be. I have caught myself too many times becoming one of these "old folks"...yikes! Great flow, and great poem!
Go Easy,
J. King
posted by
J.King
on July 25, 2005 at 10:07 PM
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It is July!!!
Hahaha. I liked the poem a lot.
posted by
Vanidad
on July 25, 2005 at 8:56 PM
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Um, I think it's July, lol..
Funny yet poignant and real.
posted by
Katray2
on July 25, 2005 at 8:52 PM
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