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A great poem from a great poet
This poem expresses alot about darkness and light, the survival against and between the two and the life were left. yes though my world is dark I AM ALIVE.

posted by Merrick on June 30, 2005 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

freerain

 So you are a poet, and a pretty good one too.  Your comment to me on the hypocrisy thing was rather riveting.  "The void that is constantly filled with nonsense" is good, although if it is a void, it can't be filled with anything.  Maybe you called me a "pssy" because you may be one yourself--and it's not necessarily a bad thing.  I will be reading you more.  Thanks.   Hemlocker

posted by Hemlocker on June 24, 2005 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

freerain

Beautifully written! 

posted by behindamask on June 23, 2005 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply