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I feel this one.
I'm going to be this old lady with this attic full of artwork, and when I die my grand kids will get it and be like, "she was so weird." Take care lady
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on May 27, 2005 at 12:06 PM
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Temple,
This is really good. Sure
you wrote it? hehe Kidding. Seriously, I really like this one a lot.
posted by
SpitFire70
on May 15, 2005 at 1:56 PM
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Dear Temple, you remain superb!
-Ted
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 13, 2005 at 11:38 AM
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Temple,
excellent! Nice to finally find a poet of your strength -- I've been reading the previous posts of the earlier numbered poets.Gee whiz.
Nice imagery, I especially like the ending. It really wraps everything up with a strong point. red
posted by
redlunar
on May 12, 2005 at 1:07 PM
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wow......all I can say is wow....this was deeply expressed....I loved it!
posted by
_Symphony_
on May 10, 2005 at 3:55 AM
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Damn you are good pretty girl...
I just wish it didn't have to hurt so much...
posted by
jimmy68
on May 9, 2005 at 12:07 PM
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Temple
I love it.."Insignificance leaves no footprints" ...that says alot..
posted by
Offy
on May 9, 2005 at 6:30 AM
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Thank you Hammock...
I'm not writing much these days here....well, I was on sabbatical, trying to be....work and life and such....but there is lots of poetry in the archives here in "no mercy" if you care to peruse. I appreciate the lovely compliment. Thanks for reading and leaving a footprint. :) (I don't do sabbatical well, so I may be back more than I say... ) ;)
posted by
Temple
on May 9, 2005 at 6:26 AM
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Very Smooth.
its so easy to read, and brings me something good. I look forward to more from you.
Thanks for the read.
posted by
Hammock_Noweilz
on May 9, 2005 at 6:05 AM
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