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littlems, it's always so touching when people come back more than once...
I always go and re-read it myself to see again what you might see. I'm glad you found some light or comfort...something special there.
I hope you feel free to print it out and keep it if you'd like, with anything I write.
posted by
Temple
on June 12, 2005 at 4:41 AM
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I'm drawn to this poem temple - it truly is beautiful and thought I would leave a comment again for you here.
posted by
littlemspickles
on June 12, 2005 at 12:31 AM
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powerful stuff
posted by
littlemspickles
on March 25, 2005 at 1:33 PM
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I loved the short lines...added nice atmosphere.
You said so much in such few words.
posted by
April_Michelle
on March 21, 2005 at 5:07 PM
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posted by
RachelAnna
on March 18, 2005 at 9:35 AM
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nice writing
have a wonderful day....Take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on March 18, 2005 at 7:03 AM
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the box is under the bed, silly boy, not your head...
And that's the beauty of poetry, you assume it's something dark....it means something totally different to me.
posted by
Temple
on March 17, 2005 at 10:53 PM
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I like this one...
but I've told you that before...I'm just not sure I want wat's in the box under my head to get out...
posted by
jimmy68
on March 17, 2005 at 7:49 PM
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Darkke, I have a hard time with some poetry, too.
There's nothing to "get" here....not in class....let the words wash over you and take you where ever they will. I'm quite sure you're not dense.
posted by
Temple
on March 17, 2005 at 3:13 PM
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Spitfire, that's what I like about it, too.
They are my thoughts and feelings, but I don't have to explain. And someone else can find something different there entirely. :)
posted by
Temple
on March 17, 2005 at 3:12 PM
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I've always had a hard time with poetry. Maybe I'm too dense, or impaitient. I hope you find all the light and wholeness you desire.
posted by
DarrkeThoughts
on March 17, 2005 at 3:09 PM
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Temple,
Beautiful and quite interesting. I suppose this one can be interpreted in many ways for different people. That's one thing I like about certain poetry.
posted by
SpitFire70
on March 17, 2005 at 3:07 PM
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