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Georgia, No worries.

posted by kingmi on February 16, 2005 at 3:41 AM | link to this | reply

Hey Kingmi - just saw this comment!  And, um ... you're right!  :)

posted by Georgia on February 15, 2005 at 6:27 PM | link to this | reply

Georgia, only a madman would scoff at this description of serenity!

posted by kingmi on February 10, 2005 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply

Hey, Kingmi!  I love these lines:

I scoff at the normal of the earth, their humanness so obvious, doing what now?

Inside quiet, warm homes with shutters pulled down;  a little romance here.The need for support in a domestic farce.  

Lives are wasted.  Smoke from the chimneys.

I think about this whenever I'm driving in an unfamiliar area and see houses on the side of the road.  

posted by Georgia on February 9, 2005 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

kingmi - what a fun poem to read.   I liked the "ha ha's"    I liked the feeling of health and vitality-- alive and physically active but apparently unable to express true feelings as your voice is "puny" and your pen "paraplegic".

posted by TAPS. on February 3, 2005 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Experience, I am looking forward to your new writings!

posted by kingmi on February 1, 2005 at 6:41 PM | link to this | reply

Gifted
I was reading your blog. You write gifted pretty well. I like how you decribe your feelings. And also Thank You for visiting my blog and writing a comment. Come again. Thank You

posted by Experience on February 1, 2005 at 2:09 PM | link to this | reply

Ghee ghee, Thank you!

posted by kingmi on February 1, 2005 at 12:46 PM | link to this | reply

hehe naw, i liked it.

posted by Gheeghee on February 1, 2005 at 6:13 AM | link to this | reply

Too much caffein!

posted by kingmi on January 31, 2005 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply