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Back again --trying to choose...nice poem!
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 16, 2005 at 10:21 AM
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Tapsel...
I am humbled as usual by your kindness, thank you very much.
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 11, 2005 at 6:19 PM
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Alf - I'm afraid you just might get a vote from me.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 11, 2005 at 6:09 PM
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Gheeghee...
What a kiss indeed.
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 11, 2005 at 5:59 PM
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and what a kiss.
posted by
Gheeghee
on January 11, 2005 at 1:40 PM
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Norse...
This was my second entry .. took the words in a new direction..
A New Life I already put the link on GG's.
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on January 10, 2005 at 7:21 PM
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Georgia...
Your comment humbles me, thank you.
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 10, 2005 at 6:32 PM
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How lovely to read such a sensual poem written by a gentleman who appreciates the real meaning of a kiss! Bravo!
posted by
Georgia
on January 10, 2005 at 5:50 PM
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Whammie...
Glad I could inspire you!
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 9, 2005 at 11:54 PM
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Original influence...
Thanks a bunch. It was sort of an experiment.
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 9, 2005 at 11:54 PM
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THAT WAS NICE ALF!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now I need another shower.......(refer to my comment in Quirky's blog)........
posted by
WHAMENATOR
on January 9, 2005 at 11:42 PM
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Not quite what I was expecting from you. Nice!
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 9, 2005 at 5:26 PM
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Quirky...
OK, LOL...I'm just making sure. I'm not used to writing stuff like this so I'm a little self conscious of it. I am glad you enjoyed it.
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 9, 2005 at 5:18 PM
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Sappy? Are you kidding? There's not a tenth of an ounce of sap anywhere in there!
posted by
Julia.
on January 9, 2005 at 5:16 PM
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Norse...
Oh King of understatement LOL.. Liked it was quite a bit lower than I was thinking.
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on January 9, 2005 at 5:15 PM
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Why thank you Gypsy...glad you liked it :-)
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 9, 2005 at 5:14 PM
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Norse...
Hmmm... I'll comment after the cold shower LOL. Seriously though.. this is beauticious!! (beautiful and delicious LOL)
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on January 9, 2005 at 5:12 PM
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Quirky...
Thank you...you really think so? Not too sappy?
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 9, 2005 at 5:11 PM
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Thanks Gheeghee...!!
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 9, 2005 at 5:10 PM
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Kingmi...
I'm glad...thanks!
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 9, 2005 at 5:10 PM
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Whoa! My computer just started smoking from all that sensual heat. You ought to write more of these...I would like to read them even if I had to go out and buy me a new computer!
Oh and darn it, I'm still working on my poem but I used nape of the neck, too...
posted by
Julia.
on January 9, 2005 at 5:05 PM
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very sensual
posted by
Gheeghee
on January 9, 2005 at 5:03 PM
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Alf, Super! Really was there for a moment! You brought it all back.
posted by
kingmi
on January 9, 2005 at 5:01 PM
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