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Alf,
Thank you for that nice suggestion.

posted by Julia. on January 1, 2005 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Quirky...
May I suggest "Loves Abyss"

posted by A_Norseman on December 30, 2004 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

electric,
nice to see you, thanks for the title suggestion.

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

thank you Sue!

posted by Julia. on December 29, 2004 at 6:43 AM | link to this | reply

quirky...........how about...................
THREE DIMENSIONAL PAIN?.................

posted by electric_light_ambition on December 28, 2004 at 11:43 PM | link to this | reply

Quirky, you are so talented

posted by Star5_ on December 28, 2004 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

Meri--interesting!
Thanks for the visit.

posted by Julia. on December 28, 2004 at 6:00 PM | link to this | reply

Black Mystery Descends
Maybe?

posted by myrrhage_ on December 28, 2004 at 2:44 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Taps!

posted by Julia. on December 28, 2004 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

Quirky - Incomprehensible

posted by TAPS. on December 28, 2004 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Spitfire,
Interesting that you should suggest that...after Deverdoodle suggested Crimson Tide, I was actually thinking of callling it just Crimson River.

posted by Julia. on December 28, 2004 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

Hollee,
thanks...but I don't understand what you mean...were you channeling "Grouchy" again?

posted by Julia. on December 28, 2004 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply

Drowning in Crimson River

posted by SpitFire70 on December 27, 2004 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply

Drowning in Crimson River

posted by SpitFire70 on December 27, 2004 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply

quirky

falling heartboat

(this suggestion brought to you by someone disguising himself as....)

posted by Hollee on December 27, 2004 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks GG!

posted by Julia. on December 27, 2004 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

drowning

posted by Gheeghee on December 27, 2004 at 11:55 AM | link to this | reply

Void, Symphony, Dever and Mia,
thanks for your suggestions!

posted by Julia. on December 27, 2004 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

quirky
The Agony Of Death

posted by MiaElla on December 27, 2004 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

Crimson Tide

posted by Deverdoodle on December 27, 2004 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

wow....Quirky that nearly ripped my heart out!
very deep...excellent poem.....for a title....Hmmm...how about "deep scars hidden away in my hurting soul"

posted by _Symphony_ on December 27, 2004 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

Quirky, I very much like this poem...
but I'm stumped for a title... how does 'undertow' sound?

posted by void-is on December 27, 2004 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply