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thanks,

posted by Star5_ on April 15, 2005 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

Cosy
You are one in a million for doing that...I relate very well. Great poem!

posted by cosy on April 8, 2005 at 7:11 AM | link to this | reply

thanks tapesel

posted by Star5_ on December 9, 2004 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply

i know dear tapesel

posted by 1965stories on December 9, 2004 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

Great poem - SKY5/Sue - Not old, Not cold. You have a heart
full of love and sometimes love brings pain.

posted by TAPS. on December 9, 2004 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

thanks carpenter

posted by Star5_ on December 9, 2004 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

You have a good…strong spirit…

posted by justAcarpenter on December 9, 2004 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

but it's ok

posted by Star5_ on December 9, 2004 at 2:52 PM | link to this | reply

such a sad poem

posted by _Symphony_ on December 9, 2004 at 1:42 PM | link to this | reply

ONE OF MY POEM IS IN RICKY J FICO'S GUEST BOOK, THANKS RICKY

posted by Star5_ on December 9, 2004 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

ONE OF MY POEM IS IN RICKY J FICO'S GUEST BOOK, THANKS RICKY

posted by Star5_ on December 9, 2004 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

ONE OF MY POEM IS IN RICKY J FICO'S GUEST BOOK, THANKS RICKY

posted by Star5_ on December 9, 2004 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

WHAME, THANKS FOR THE FLOWER.

posted by Star5_ on December 9, 2004 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

posted by WHAMENATOR on December 9, 2004 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

thank you original.

posted by Star5_ on December 9, 2004 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice poem!

posted by Original_Influence on December 9, 2004 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

thanks diversion for you

posted by Star5_ on December 9, 2004 at 12:25 AM | link to this | reply

Loved this poem!
Good work Sky.

posted by Diversion4u on December 8, 2004 at 10:44 PM | link to this | reply

I never feel old, because i look pretty young than I am, I look fine and
still feel hot, but I WAS PRETENDING COLD.....

posted by Star5_ on December 8, 2004 at 10:36 PM | link to this | reply

I never feel old, because i look pretty young than I am, I look fine and
still feel hot, but I WAS PRETENDING COLD.....

posted by Star5_ on December 8, 2004 at 10:36 PM | link to this | reply

I never feel old, because i look pretty young than I am, I look fine and
still feel hot, but I WAS PRETENDING COLD.....

posted by Star5_ on December 8, 2004 at 10:35 PM | link to this | reply

Don’t even think about it, SKY5.

No Old…

No Cold…

Ride this wave that God has created…

With hope and "your" shine…

My soul cries for your pain…

For I know its feel…

But all waves rise…

To the Rose…

 

posted by justAcarpenter on December 8, 2004 at 10:30 PM | link to this | reply

i am not mad at any one, just to myself.

posted by Star5_ on December 8, 2004 at 9:55 PM | link to this | reply

katray, i remember the words from you from the begining,

 

posted by Star5_ on December 8, 2004 at 9:55 PM | link to this | reply

Oh Sue, you're not old. Or cold. I feel your anguish - prayers and hugs sent your way.

posted by Katray2 on December 8, 2004 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

That is very noble Sue. I believe we sometimes find our soul loves on earth, but only get to say hello. Goodbye often comes too soon on this plane. May your heart find peace.

posted by Katray2 on December 8, 2004 at 9:51 PM | link to this | reply

If it is so, katray i never want to love again. I am not lucky in love,
now it's time to get old and cold and be a nun

posted by Star5_ on December 8, 2004 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

I know, I know, I know, but when I started loving him, I knew he was alone,

He was done with her, but fate brought him back to her for a reason, and I had to be a human to understand. I loved him, I loved him so much, still. But I will never be in any one's life, because once I lost a man in my life when some one else came to get him, that never healed my heart, so I never want to be another woman's reason for pain.

posted by Star5_ on December 8, 2004 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and sad
How heartbreaking Sue. But true love never truly leaves; the soul holds it forever...

posted by Katray2 on December 8, 2004 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply

Sky5, human

posted by kingmi on December 8, 2004 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

sky5, who are you? You are a hun being with rights. You can assert those
rights, without becoming aggressive and fighting.

posted by kingmi on December 8, 2004 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

I know I still love him, but I can't take him away from some one love him
and constantly fighting for him, who am I to take some one away?

posted by Star5_ on December 8, 2004 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

sky5 very creative!

posted by kingmi on December 8, 2004 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply

I am on a crazy mood to write today

posted by Star5_ on December 8, 2004 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply