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Alf! This ROCKS! :)
posted by
Georgia
on January 26, 2005 at 5:17 PM
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Ceil...
Hey, thanks for going back so far. I appreciate your reading.
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 15, 2005 at 1:23 PM
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Wonderful!
I like the next to last stanza particularly...
posted by
Ciel
on January 15, 2005 at 12:04 PM
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Thank you 1965stories..
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 10, 2004 at 8:59 PM
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very nice one Alf
posted by
1965stories
on December 10, 2004 at 8:24 PM
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Tapsel...I'm so happy you liked it.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 9, 2004 at 4:58 PM
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This was a great poem, Alf. Fun to read and yet with a message.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 8, 2004 at 2:22 PM
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Now there is a good reason to keep reading - LOL!
posted by
MerryAnne
on December 7, 2004 at 3:31 PM
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Merryanne...LOL, It's likely. Perhaps my energy ignites them from
out here in cyber land through your computer.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 7, 2004 at 3:22 PM
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I should leave more commments for you Alf. It never fails that when I have one of your posts up one of the kids hurls themselves towards certain death. I think they must be kindred spirits of yours :)
posted by
MerryAnne
on December 7, 2004 at 3:10 PM
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Suomynona...Very perseptive...I wasn't really
going for Irish nessesarily...but folksy accent similar to irish is what I was thinking when I wrote it, since it's hard to write english in a Norwegian accent. Thanks for reading.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 7, 2004 at 3:09 PM
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Thanks merryanne...I don't know about all that though, but
I definitly appreciate your comments.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 7, 2004 at 3:07 PM
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Alf
That was a good one ..'t'be sure, t'be sure". For some reason I was reading it in my head with an Irish accent! I don't know if you wrote it that way....but that's the way it came out! I really enjoyed your imagery. I also liked the 'lilting' verses. Well done!
posted by
suomynona
on December 7, 2004 at 3:05 PM
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Good job Alf, you are a much better poet than I. :)
posted by
MerryAnne
on December 7, 2004 at 3:04 PM
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Sincerityanna...Thank you also...please come again.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 7, 2004 at 3:01 PM
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Sincerityanna...Thank you also...please come again.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 7, 2004 at 3:00 PM
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David Cryer...thank you, I hope you visit my poems again.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 7, 2004 at 3:00 PM
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WOW!
Was the first one of yours that I read too...was very good...
posted by
SincerityAnna
on December 7, 2004 at 9:53 AM
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Good poem. First thing I've read of yours. I'm impressed. I loved the philosophy of dying with your eyes open, doing something. And fighting death when it comes. It was a very uplifting poem despite it's subject matter.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on December 7, 2004 at 9:52 AM
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Tanoolicious, Gypsyredhead33, and original influence.....
thank you very much.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 7, 2004 at 6:27 AM
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Very nice poem! I loved it!
I especially loved that last bit!
posted by
Original_Influence
on December 7, 2004 at 4:18 AM
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Great Job..
It has good rhythm too!
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on December 7, 2004 at 3:58 AM
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I really liked this!
posted by
Tanoolicious
on December 7, 2004 at 3:25 AM
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Alf,
yeah, a little more goofy than all the other Alfs, lol.
posted by
Julia.
on December 6, 2004 at 9:34 PM
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Quirky....many thanks. Is it really a
different side?
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 6, 2004 at 9:33 PM
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Alf,
This is great! Funny, too. A whole 'nother side to you!!
posted by
Julia.
on December 6, 2004 at 9:31 PM
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Passionflower...thanks. I like to throw out a ryme once in a while.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 6, 2004 at 9:17 PM
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Don't see much rhyming poetry anymore but I enjoyed it. And I feel the same way about death.
posted by
Passionflower
on December 6, 2004 at 9:14 PM
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