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awesome

 

 

posted by marzieh on October 24, 2004 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

i always look for that girl at closing time ;-)

posted by FreeManWalking on October 24, 2004 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

posted by WHAMENATOR on October 22, 2004 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

Angie girl,

I love Margaritas.  If you lived closer, I'd seriously leave work and come get you and then we'd drink till we were silly and sick to our stomachs, and management sends us home...lol.

Now go write that novel!

posted by MiaElla on October 22, 2004 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

A Margarita! Yes,

I'll take one!  Great poem MiaElla, your descriptions are magnetic!  How about a margarita for both of us! PS- I'm sorry I'm a terrible speller.  Speller- that's probably not even a word!  lol

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on October 22, 2004 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

sounds like she might be ready to get it on.

posted by scriber on October 22, 2004 at 10:56 AM | link to this | reply

wow this is great

well done

posted by _Symphony_ on October 22, 2004 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

She sounds like a hot bundle!

Vivid imagery.    Good stuff.

posted by Tremac on October 22, 2004 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

that is one awesome poem!!!!!

posted by Tanoolicious on October 22, 2004 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

MiaElla

Lovely imagery. Thank you.

posted by Laroux on October 22, 2004 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply