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awesome
posted by
marzieh
on October 24, 2004 at 5:22 PM
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i always look for that girl at closing time ;-)
posted by
FreeManWalking
on October 24, 2004 at 6:44 AM
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posted by
WHAMENATOR
on October 22, 2004 at 2:26 PM
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Angie girl,
I love Margaritas. If you lived closer, I'd seriously leave work and come get you and then we'd drink till we were silly and sick to our stomachs, and management sends us home...lol.
Now go write that novel!
posted by
MiaElla
on October 22, 2004 at 11:32 AM
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A Margarita! Yes,
I'll take one! Great poem MiaElla, your descriptions are magnetic!
How about a margarita for both of us!
PS- I'm sorry I'm a terrible speller. Speller- that's probably not even a word! lol
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on October 22, 2004 at 11:24 AM
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sounds like she might be ready to get it on.
posted by
scriber
on October 22, 2004 at 10:56 AM
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wow this is great
well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on October 22, 2004 at 10:24 AM
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She sounds like a hot bundle!
Vivid imagery. Good stuff.
posted by
Tremac
on October 22, 2004 at 7:53 AM
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that is one awesome poem!!!!!
posted by
Tanoolicious
on October 22, 2004 at 7:49 AM
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MiaElla
Lovely imagery. Thank you.
posted by
Laroux
on October 22, 2004 at 7:48 AM
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