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teddypoet
Thanks for the read. I'm not sure exactly what you mean by fear, guilt, or cold hard cash, but this was written to the judge and legal end of the spectrum that were the ultimate decision makers of my fate before I was even born. I have nothing to gain but knowledge that I am entitled to.

posted by SpitFire70 on March 30, 2004 at 12:59 AM | link to this | reply

fear , guilt or cold cash?
beautifully done, lady! I have a halftsister and a niece out there in the shadows; have to wonder if the key that will unlock the doors is
fear, guilt or that old favorite, cold hard cash.

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on March 30, 2004 at 12:34 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Bon-V,

  It was written from the heart...and head.

posted by SpitFire70 on March 26, 2004 at 2:56 AM | link to this | reply

A thought-provoking poem
written from the heart

posted by bon-voyage on March 26, 2004 at 1:11 AM | link to this | reply