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OOOOOOOOOOOOH i LIKE THAT---POETIC TRAVELOGUE
posted by
poetjpb
on March 29, 2004 at 8:25 PM
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Sorry it took me a few days to get back here but I needed some time for this. Like a poetic travelogue
posted by
beachbelle
on March 28, 2004 at 4:20 PM
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I am staggering with joy from all your wonderful comments
posted by
poetjpb
on March 26, 2004 at 6:53 PM
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Say this really in gutteral style, deep like "oooohhhh yeaaahhhh"
Whew! I feel like I just got home and got out of my car, from a short trip up to Santa Barbara. And for those of you who have never been - I just watched a softball game in a grassy park, at the foot of a very green hill, right across the street from the goregeous Santa Barbara Beach. Read this work slowly, let it work it's way into the eye of your mind and look, listen and feel for her words. She's got the soul of SB in this work. Bravo!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!! AUTHOR!!!!! AUTHOR!!!! AUTHOR!!!!
SFTreat
posted by
sftreat
on March 25, 2004 at 7:14 PM
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Wowie Poetjpb,
Thank you for that poetry, wowie is the best word I can come up with. For a few moments there,. I felt like I was with ya, and suddenly I wished forty years would just drop away, and I could stroll California beaches with ya. That was all so lovely. I am sorry about your brother, i knw about such things, that tear at the very soul of an artist, a creator like you are. bless ya woman.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 25, 2004 at 7:00 PM
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Wowie Poetjpb,
Thank you for that poetry, wowie is the best word I can come up with. For a few moments there,. I felt like I was with ya, and suddenly I wished forty years would just drop away, and I could stroll California beaches with ya. That was all so lovely. I am sorry about your brother, i knw about such things, that tear at the very soul of an artist, a creator like you are. bless ya woman.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 25, 2004 at 7:00 PM
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thanks katray, yeah it's pretty big, huh?
It's just now sinking in. He died flying just for fun in Wisconsin.
He flew for American Airlines for 30 years and dies in a small Piper having fun.
But you know he died doing what he loved most. My brother, Carl sucked the marrow out of life.
Lucky guy. He loved his job, it was his passion. He knew the Lord which is a great comfort.
posted by
poetjpb
on March 24, 2004 at 6:19 PM
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Lovely sights, sounds and tastes you conjure..
I felt carried away to your paradise. So very sad about your brother. Deepest condolences.
posted by
Katray2
on March 24, 2004 at 6:00 PM
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THANKS FOR ALL THE WONDERFUL COMMENTS
posted by
poetjpb
on March 24, 2004 at 11:53 AM
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Good stuff poet...
You manage well
to catch
the wealth and beauty
of my hometown
wilst ignoring
or unknowing
the depths
of darkside
depravity
in which I steep
daily
in my chozen profession
I need reminding
of these truths
to avoid despair
for it is truly
beautiful here
thank you
posted by
jimmy68
on March 24, 2004 at 11:40 AM
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Awesome poetry!
I like your usage of words. I also read your chocolate poem, and the one about don't own me or something like that. I also write poetry, but mine is not that great so I leave it off of Blogit.
posted by
Sherri_G
on March 24, 2004 at 11:35 AM
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here's a half of a thank you==hahahahahah
thanks--here now read the other half-----------ha
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posted by
poetjpb
on March 24, 2004 at 11:06 AM
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Very nice poetry! Although I guess I read only half of them in this post.
posted by
TARZANA
on March 24, 2004 at 11:05 AM
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