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I enjoyed your first draft. Looks like you have a winner. Children's books allow you to really use your imagination. The child in us never goes away. We bury it.
posted by
BearcatMike
on May 18, 2024 at 5:06 PM
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I have found that children's stories do well on Amazon and beyond.
Good luck with it.
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posted by
BigV
on May 18, 2024 at 10:27 AM
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I love seeing you writing stories....
.....I think I've given up on that and just make do with saying "Hi" on Blogit and Facebook. But, one never knows what tomorrow will bring. There's always tomorrow.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 17, 2024 at 5:43 PM
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it is going to be a great story, it is off to a great start.Doesn't need much done to it. Just a few unnecessary words at beginning or end of a sentence or two. {Something I learned from having my manuscript edited. I have a habit of starting a sentence with "Actually"....and they took them out.
posted by
Kabu
on May 17, 2024 at 11:03 AM
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I am liking it. You have done a good job bringing Zoey to life.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 17, 2024 at 10:22 AM
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Good morning
I like the direction your story is headed to. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on May 17, 2024 at 8:37 AM
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You've got me looking forward to what's next. Please.
posted by
Pat_B
on May 17, 2024 at 6:13 AM
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